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Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Birthday Girl xx❤

27/07/2020



Chapter 51 of 'The Best Birthday Ever!'   Of Georgia's journey! 
Chapter 51.

As she twisted and squirmed, her hair flipped up like a broom on top of her head.  She had PANIC written all over her rusted face she  screamed louder than 10000000, 0000000000 seagulls.  Little did she know that...............She was falling down the rabbit hole into Wonderland! 


She plumeted down, like a rocket decending back to earth. She landed all twisted on a field of grass. Or what she thought was grass....... It was actually, green apple liqorice. "Tooooooo Bbbadddd I Cccaaaaant eaaat itttttt." Georgia said as she was falling unconcious from her sudden experience. 


She was drenched in her own slobbery zombie drool. She could kind of see, it was really fuzzy. But...........
She saw a blurry  image, she thought she was hilousinating she thought she saw two ginormoous cards, a 2 of spades  and a 3 of hearts.  Georgia finally fully woke up. The cards were carrying her by her tiny bony arms. Her short uneven legs who could be mistaken for mishapen pencils weren't even touching the delicous green apple grass.  They were taking her.........  To the QUEEN of hearts!  

She walked up the sour patches steps into the caramal timtam throne room, her majesty Queen Georgia,  QUEEN of hearts! Was waiting for her......... 

"Your Majesty, we found this girl on the forbiddon field." Said the 3 of hearts. "What should we do with this rotton bag of  filth?" said the 2 of spades. The queen was staring into Georgias scared eyes. She didn't say a word. All of a asudden she stood up and walked towards Georgia who was kneeling on the red liqorice carpet. "What tis your name?" Said the queen. "Ahhhhh" "Georgia, your MaJeStY.....". "WHAT!!!!!!!".  

"THERE IS ONLY ROOM FOR ONE GEORGIA IN WONDERLAND, AND IT"S MEEEEEE!" Said the furocious queen! "What, I'm so sorry. Please dont hurt me!!!!!" said Georgia. "You will PAY!!!". Said the queen. "OFF WITH HER HEAD!!!" 🔪  "Fetch me one of the chefs knifes, as sharp as a zillion shards of glass 2 of spades". 

As bloood splatters all over the destroyed caramal timtams. Georgias blood made its way onto the Queens unforgettable face, she lifted her left hand and wiped the blood off with a smack. Still it stained her goregous antique doll face. "Dispose of her to my pets" said the queen. "Which ones your majesty?". Said the 3 of hearts. "Feed her to the crocs".......................

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Georgia,
    wow this is very descriptive and a little dark.I cant what to see the next chapter.My favorite thing about this is how you say there is only space for one Georgia I find that paints a picture in my head

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  2. hi georgia,
    i like the very descriptive words you have added to this story. It sounded very intense and was very interesting to read i like that you made this descriptive and even added some little emojis. Its not boring and i didnt lack reading the whole story i will be looking foward to reading your next chapter well done!

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